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Sometimes you just don’t get it right Or at least, that’s what I thought I was going to discuss in this email. Having revisited my first attempt at arranging the Winnie the Pooh theme, I think I may have been unduly hard on myself. The first effort wasn’t bad at all, and I now find myself wondering whether it could work as a contrasting version of the theme in the new arrangement, or whether I should simply strengthen the orchestration of the newer version, which may be scored a little too sparsely for an amateur group. Perhaps by the end of this email I will have made my mind up. Revisiting ideas: why creative work often improves through comparison Comparing these ideas offers a useful glimpse into how an arranging sketch develops. My hope is that it demonstrates something important: ideas rarely arrive perfectly shaped, and creativity often means revisiting, reshaping, and reconsidering what we have already written. Exploring multiple possibilities is not just part of the process: it is one way of defining creativity itself. Creativity is a divergent act, even if Schoenberg and others might prefer to describe it as convergent. Listening and looking: the arranging sketches so far Below is a Google Drive folder containing four files:
If you begin with the first sketch, you will notice that it is shorter and incomplete. Comparing it with the later score reveals a substantial difference: the newer version is fully laid out in the structure and duration I am aiming for. I have also added a piano staff to help work through compositional details such as the introduction and coda. Link: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/11EG8BFZZWU456fBNGS_C-HAd44QRWcTu?usp=sharing Simplifying the first verse: reducing texture to make space You should notice that the orchestration of the first verse is dramatically revised in the later version. This was not because I thought the original orchestration was poor, but because I wanted a less texturally busy verse: something that would leave space for the countermelody contrast that appears later at the dal segno. However, I do wonder whether a little more support in the accompanying voices might be helpful, because:
And concert bands are most commonly amateur and welcoming groups with players of vastly different abilities. What do you think of the orchestrations? Verse 2 and the chorus: refining instrumental roles and texture In the first sketch score, there are basic ideas for the second verse and the beginnings of a chorus. In the near-complete version, these sections are fleshed out with some refinements. For example:
Some ideas remained unchanged:
Creating contrast: sketching a modulatory variation In the newest version of the score, I have composed a modulatory and varied version of the verse. Returning to 3/4, I initially sketched the texture by giving the woodwinds the rhythm I wanted without finalising the notes. That is why you can see chord symbols written on the brass staff I used them to correct the harmonic shaping of the woodwind and saxophone writing. Introduction and coda still to be written As you can clearly see, I still need to complete the beginning and end. I would like the introduction and coda to draw on motifs and fragments from across the arrangement. At the moment, the coda is more developed than the introduction. From sketch to full score: a built-in review stage Some things will inevitably change as I move from sketch to open score. However, I expect the process to involve more revoicing and redistribution than large-scale rewriting. This is one of the reasons I like working through a sketch score phase: it creates a natural “hard stop” in the process: a built-in moment to review and verify ideas before committing them to a full score. Closing thoughts: revision as part of the craft Revisiting this sketch has been a useful reminder that arranging (like composing or orchestrating) is rarely a straight line from idea to finished score. Sometimes the first attempt contains more value than we initially realise. Other times, the second attempt reveals what the first was really trying to become. Both versions are part of the same creative process. Next time, I will likely share how I move from this sketch into a full score, and what changes inevitably appear once the music is distributed across the ensemble. In the meantime, I would love to hear your thoughts. If you have comments, questions, or observations about the arrangement: feel free to reply to this email. Hearing how others approach these problems is always illuminating. Regards, P.S. Incase you need the files to my arrangement again, here they are: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/11EG8BFZZWU456fBNGS_C-HAd44QRWcTu?usp=sharing |
Hello. My name is George Marshall and I am the founder of Any Old Music. I am a composer with over 10-years of experience, having completed work on 50+ projects for video-games, films and the concert hall. In 2020, I completed my doctorate in Music Composition. My PhD was on constraint and how it emerges in creative projects. For example, team discussions in video-game projects. If a video-game team presented a mood-board and certain briefs, these constrain and challenge the composer to compose in a particular way or style. Less quantifiable than, say, the application of serialism, but probably just as (if not more) constraining and creatively directing. It was during my PhD that I realised that there would only be two outcomes for me as a composer: I became a professional composer who needed to compose lots of music in not enough time. I became an amateur/hobbyist or semi-professional composer who needed to compose less music but still with not enough time. With this in mind I eventually opted for something more along the lines of semi-professional, but with an ambition of setting up Any Old Music as a means of helping similarly time strapped music makers. Particularly those in the second group, the hobbyists and semi-professionals, whose composing competes much more for time against other aspects of life. Composition is incredibly rewarding. You never stop learning and developing as a composer. Furthermore, many of us boast renegade autodidactic personalities to a certain extent. My hope is that Any Old Music’s self-paced composition courses can help composers to continue growing, by learning through creating and doing so in their own time.
A simple but significant change has happened in my Winnie the Pooh arrangement. The whole piece has been transposed down a tone (major 2nd) and the arrangement is now beginning to take shape in full concert band score, having reached a level of detail in the condensed sketch that felt solid enough to build from. So today, I thought I would share how that move is going: what seems to be working well, what seems less convincing, and why. Down a tone First, the decision to transpose the score...
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Perhaps it is the sickness bug talking, and I am delirious!? But, I think I may have nudged my Winnie the Pooh introduction a little further forward simply by sitting down to write to you. I had intended to report that I was stuck. Instead, what has emerged is a clearer picture of three developing versions of the opening, each revealing something useful about the direction of travel. I think they also each get closer to the introduction I would like. Below you will see extracts from each...